Persuasive Writing

Room 9 have been doing persuasive writing. We have been doing it on subjects like why smoking should be banned and why school uniform should be banned.

Why smoking should be banned?

Do like the smell of smoke? More and more people are smoking every day this has to stop!

I believe that smoking should be banned I believe this because it is polluting the air with smoke and killing hundreds of people and causing lung disease.

Firstly, I believe that smoking should be banned because 1/3 of people in the world are wasting their money on smokes. They are also slowly killing them selves as well. Instead of spending your money on cigarettes they could buy something like for example a house, car, clothes and food the tings that you need, but instead the people that smoke spend their money on cigarettes. If you buy one packet of cigarettes it will cost you about 8395 dollars a year.

Secondly smoking doesn’t just affect one person. It can affect everybody around the person that is smoking. So it is still dangerous being around a person that is smoking. Smoking is dangerous because it can rot your lungs and cause lung cancer it can also rot your teethe.

Finally I think that smoking should be banned because it will stop all the littering of cigarette butts and make the environment more clean and healthy.

By Isaac Todd